Pre - Hong Kong trip poem

Before I left for Hong Kong, I was so excited that a little poem arose in my heart. Enjoy!!! But do not expect much..This is my first..
He appeared a daylight ghost in the late morning blaze
Beneath the innocent glasses stood a man disguised as angel
With faults and lines she couldn't see, or simply chose not to
The two began their little chattery, unknown to what was to become
Nothing too impressive, or so she thought
The night emerged, he came out cold and hungry
He took the sandwich with grateful silence felt with the heart
As unexpected as he appeared, he went away
Out of nowhere he appeared again
Brainy, witty and funny was all it takes to win her
He tossed the ball; the queer of his eyes made her lose her step
Hence the clock ticked and a year passed them by
The hour they cuddled was as fresh as faint memories could allow
The one they had stolen for their own selfish use
If only that hour could hold a life time
His brotherly advice never left the sober her
Perhaps it was never meant to be
Along his passing he took a part of her
But with longing hearts she wishes for his return
Oceans apart her love will never dim
With loving patience she awaits
And let this return be for eternity

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3 Response to "Pre - Hong Kong trip poem"

  1. siewlee says:
    9:59 pm

    hey nice poem there... =) *wink*

  2. icefreak says:
    11:29 pm

    you know how much that meant

  3. icefreak says:
    1:03 pm

    she decided not to wait edi. no more patience